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Chapter 3 - The First Decline

For another twenty minutes, the anniversary celebration continued inside L’Étoile as if nothing in the universe had changed. The string quartet played Vivaldi, the waiters poured vintage Bordeaux, and Amber basked in the warm glow of her own malice, convinced she had successfully established her dominance over the aging mother-in-law she despised.

Then came the moment of reckoning.

The dessert course had just concluded, and the head waiter approached Steven with a sleek leather folder containing the final itemized bill for the evening: eighty-seven thousand, four hundred and fifty dollars, inclusive of wine, venue rental, security, and the custom five-tier cake.

Steven, accustomed to simply waving his hand and having everything charged seamlessly to the master corporate account, casually pulled out the titanium business card I had provided him and handed it over without looking.

The waiter bowed politely, took the card to the portable terminal near the service station, and swiped it.

The machine beeped twice—a sharp, high-pitched error tone that echoed faintly in the quietening room.

The waiter frowned, removed the card, wiped the chip on his sleeve, and swiped it a second time.

Declined. Contact Issuer.

Slightly embarrassed, the waiter walked back to the head of the table. "Pardon me, Mr. Herrera, but the primary corporate card was declined by the issuer. Do you have an alternative method of payment?"

Steven blinked, his expression shifting from casual boredom to mild annoyance. "That’s impossible. Run it again. Try the secondary corporate routing code."

The waiter hurried back to the terminal, entered the manual override codes, and tried the account again.

Declined. Fraud Alert / Account Closed.

Across the table, Amber noticed the delay. Her smile faltered slightly as she leaned over. "Is there a problem, darling?"

"Just a stupid administrative glitch," Steven muttered, waving a hand dismissively. He reached into his designer jacket and pulled out his personal American Express card—a card that was also backed by a monthly stipend drawn from my corporate accounts. "Try this one."

The waiter swiped the personal card.

Declined. Over Limit / Account Frozen.

By now, several guests sitting nearby had noticed the repeated rejections. Whispers began to ripple quietly down the length of the table. The live musicians, sensing the abrupt drop in the room's energetic temperature, stopped playing mid-song. The room grew unnaturally still.

Amber’s face tightened with sudden anxiety. She reached into her own snakeskin clutch, pulled out her personal gold card, and tossed it onto the silver tray with a forced, brittle laugh. "Honestly, the competence of modern banking is appalling. Use mine."

The waiter took her card, swiped it through the reader, and stared at the glowing red screen in disbelief.

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Declined. Account Suspended.

Silence descended upon the private dining room like a heavy woolen blanket. Every eye at the table turned toward Steven and Amber. The illusion of effortless wealth and untouchable status began to crack right down the middle.

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